''You will never cacht me angry mob of cute little puppy''i yelled in happyness. I guess u are (bark bark bark) wanting to know how shut up dog sorry got here. It start this morning whaen i was at the dog pound to day i got a new puppy and i was told to give it what it wants it will mutlyply and try and eat me. (2 hours later) What do u want now food,water,toy,freand,or a big juase streak.it never give me a answer and it started to multply and start to chase me thruorth town.
''way are you running'' ask bob the camper. ''a lots of puppys want to eat me'' i reply. I ran to the end of how my big teo land not ask me why i was on the bigest cliff 2,000,000,000,000,000,000,000, miles long it was die or jump of cuorse i picked jump.Thats how i got here i hope i will surve this big fall to my dome luckly this puppy is afriade of water.know i learn to lisin to a warning sign next time i adote a puppy
Allen H.
8/8/2013 11:12:17 pm
I liked your story it was realy cool.
Lauren J.
8/8/2013 11:14:16 pm
I never knew I could feel like I was flying until that day.....,wait before you skip to the end I might to tell how it all began.it all started on the plane our family was going on vacation to Hawaii. I was sitting next to my brother reading a book when he looked over and said,"Lauren,you need to be more fun,all you do is read and read and read,""Um exscuse me ,reading makes you smarter and being smarter will get you farther in life."I said,"but your so boring,how bought this i dare you to do something you have never done before on this trip," "Deal!!!!!!!!" For the next the 3 days I kept thinking to my self,"What am I going to do for this dare",and then I saw it "That!!!" As soon as it caught my eye I was hooked.
Giovanni R.
8/8/2013 11:15:53 pm
Ha ha ha that's funny . I cant belive dogs were chaseing you
Allen H.
8/8/2013 11:03:11 pm
Have you ever thought about flying just for a few seconds.Well i have .Just a few weeks ago I jumped of a cliff.It felt like i was soaring the birds.I loved it my friends were cheering me on.They have never done that before.They made me feel proud.They were saying go aj go.When i got to going head first i did a front flip.Then i went in the feet first.I remember when i jumped.It felt like the whole world stopped and i had all the time in the world.Idid it when I went on my trip to hawaii.It was so much fun I know when i go back I will do it again.Even my mom did it.She was scared at first but when my dad did it she knew that she had to do it.Ifyou are ever looking for an adventure or if your just wild than try it.When my dad did it a flew where his feet was and he kicked him on accident.
george
8/8/2013 11:08:59 pm
good job i like when you felt like u time stop that was awsome
Breannna Stone
8/8/2013 11:11:19 pm
Have you ever thought about cliff diving? I have! I jumped off a cliff that was 70 feet high! It was so fun!
I was dared to jump off of a very gigantic cliff. I never say no to a dare so i had to do it! I thought to myself,"Whats the worst that can happen!" But on the inside I was very scared! What would i do if i fell on a rock? The closest hospital is 2 hours away. Why would I risk my life over a dare? All I knew was i wasnt going to be a chicken!
I walked up stairs,more stairs,and more. I finally got to the top. "This is it." I exclaimed. "I'm going to do it!" as I trembled. So I just ran off the top and tried to get this feeling out of me. The godzilla came out of me when I screamed. "AHHHHHHHH!" I shouted. As soon as I hit the water my body was unfilled of the worry. I felt like that I just fell off the empire state building! It was such an acomplishment! I was so fearless to do that! All my friends were cheering for me. I was so happy!
george
8/8/2013 11:13:13 pm
wish i made up some of that for mine cool
Alayna S.
8/8/2013 11:14:25 pm
Good job! Very creative Bre,very creative. I loved the Godzilla part!
Alayna S.
8/8/2013 11:13:03 pm
"Holy crap!" I yelled when I heard this boy say he was going to jump off the cliff. I started running up the stairs to catch the boy before he basically fell to his death. I made it,luckily. "Stop! Are you crazy?! You'll be killed!" He turned to look at me,and started laughing. "I've done this for as long as I can remember,and I'm still here aren't I?" He turned back to the cliff,then held his arms out. "How are you not terrified?! You're risking your life!" He started laughing again,like he was some genius of cliff diving. "I realise I'm risking my life in this situtation. I love it though,it makes me happy. I do it everyday,because I love the way it feels when you're jumping off and soaring through the air. The way the water catches and holds you like you're it's own. Cliff diving is basically my life,and I'd never change that." He bent his knees,and jumped. I ran to the edge and watched him fall. I had to admit,the view was gorgeous. The pink and orange sky fit perfectly with the dark blue ocean,and how the sun was sitting ever so beautifully on the horizon. I heard a splash,then immediantly looked down. He had fallen into the water,and when he popped back up,I had feeling of relief. "Well,have fun!" I screamed down at him,then walked away. I'll never forget that boy,to tell you the truth. I admire how he would just carelessly jumped of the cliff,into the enormous ocean,simply forgetting the rest of the world.
Lauren J.
8/8/2013 11:21:00 pm
I liked your story!!!!!!
Allie W .
8/8/2013 11:13:29 pm
Have you ever thaught about cliff diveing? cause I have. as I jumped off the waves hit me as I hit the water ! it felt sogood in the air . I felt like I was flying. And lauren was so happy ! I told her to come and jump too but she said" no thank you." haley said "why would someone do that." and I went back up to the top to jump again. But one thang about this jump . there were sharks every were and the could eat me. i was so scared. all my friends yelled "dont jump . "but I had already jumped.
Allen H.
8/8/2013 11:17:20 pm
ohno i wonder happens next do you get eaten or do you punch the sharks on the nose and live.
Carolynw.
8/8/2013 11:13:35 pm
He is going to get hurt in a mintue if he is not carful; he might break his arm,
or a leg ,he is going to break his neck "commented" Carolyn! then he started
to see rainbows.
Natalie H.
8/8/2013 11:13:40 pm
Have you ever thought about plunging off a cliff into the ocean?
One time i went to Californiaand i brought my friends Maya,Maddy,and Lauren.
We had alot of fun there.We were on are way back when Lauren,Maya,and Maddy saw
a huge,tall,and scary cliff."I want to go jump off that cliff!" they screamed excitedly.
I was thinking I can't do that I'm afraid of hieghts.Then,we started turning over to the area were the cliff was.
I was geting really scared and was hoping they weren't going to the cliff.
We stopped everybody started getting out of the car.
I was screaming no I'm scared of hieghts at the top of my lungs,but i ended up
having to jump.
So,we all got in a line and jumped one by one.Lauren was first she got her lungs
ready to scream then she jumped."Wayhoo!"lauren yelled all the way down
then splat she hit the water.One by one everyone went diving of the cliff.Then
it was my turn and i was so scared but then i jumped. "Wayyhooo!" I yelled all
the way down.They i realized that wasn't so bad after all.
I was worried for nothing and i am pround i got over my fear.
That was a really fun and i hope i can do it again.It was a day to remember.
Logan K
8/8/2013 11:13:41 pm
"whoo hoo!!!" I screamed as I jumped off the cliff into the cold ocean water. I HAVE BEEN CLIFF DIVING
THIS WHOLE ENTIRE WEEKEND,IT HAS BEEN A BLAST. there is one thing I have been wanting to do...jump
off the biggest cliff ever,which is 1,000 feet high!!! I will probably jump off of it this saturday,
I cant wait. the week flew bye fast,finnaly it came,saturday. my dad drove me over to the cliff at
about 10:00 in the morining.there I was at the top of the cliff I had hiked about an hour up!!!
I had put on my swimming trunks took a deep breath and..."wait!!!" my dad boomed,"SHARK!!!"
You cant swim in those waters there are sharks
Maddy B.
8/8/2013 11:13:47 pm
Have you ever seen a random person jump off a huge tower into water? Well i have, it happened when i was in flordia, i was just walking on a sidewalk, then i heard a scream. I looked over towards the water and there was a person jumping off, a tower. When they fell through the water they didn't come up, but after a minute or so they came up, i didn't say one word. After that, they just kept jumping off of it as if it was a diving board. I did not know what she was doing, but she seemed to be having alot of fun. I looked at her with a very weird look, and she just shruged and kept jumping off. I sat on the ground wondering how she did that without being scared, then she asked "do you want to jump off with me", "no, I am good" i replied. After a while it was night time and she was still jumping off it, so I decided to head home. In the morning she wasn't there. I will never forget that day that she just jumped off with no fear.
Maya.D
8/8/2013 11:14:01 pm
:( Mine deleted!!!!!!!!!
Giovanni R.
8/8/2013 11:17:01 pm
sorry :[
Madison H.
8/8/2013 11:17:12 pm
sorry
Maya.D
8/8/2013 11:18:40 pm
:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :O
George
8/8/2013 11:19:08 pm
sorry but i bet it was good one
Giovanni R.
8/8/2013 11:14:08 pm
When I was jumping of the cliff into the cold water I felt my heart beating faster and faster and faster . And I was screaming as loud as I could " help I change my mind". I want my mama"! That day is the day I will all ways remember . I never expected to be able to do that. Then a shark came out and ate me.
Allen H.
8/8/2013 11:14:16 pm
Awesome i like the dare.
TrinitiMcClure
8/8/2013 11:14:24 pm
Have you ever thought about cliff diving? Well my cousin did and he did a couple days ago, and he was amazing.
He was afraid but his dream was to be a world famous cliff diver off biggest cliffs, but he found this one cliff near our small village he told everybody every body told him that he wasn't going to. He told me "I am going to do this if they like it or not!" I replied to him "I believe in you ." The next day was the day that he was going to jump, and only me, and my sis came. When he jumped he was screaming so loud, but a soon as he hit the water all you heard was water splashing and then complete silence and then he came back up ,and
I was so happy.
As soon as he came out he gave me a hug and I said never again, he replied I'm going bigger each year!!!
Madison
8/8/2013 11:14:33 pm
Have you ever thought about jumping off a cliff into the ocean? Have you ever experianced something that was so exciting it was scary? I have experianced that exciting feeling, and I will never forget it. I was about to jump from a cliff. I was so excited to get up on the cliff and see the veiw, but when I got up there I was very nervous. My hands were sweating and shaking, but i ignored them. Then I jumped. The wind was blowing my hair back. I was screaming at the top of my lungs. However,I was relieved when i got to the ocean,although it was very cold. I will never forget that day.
Hunter W.
8/8/2013 11:14:41 pm
" Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!". I screamed as I jumped into the ocean. When I came back up I noticed something
swimming after me from a distance. I tried to climb back up the cliff but I just fell back into the water . after I came back up I noticed that it was a shark so I yelled up to my friends " hey throw me a rope so I can get away from this shark!!!!! " my friends could'nt get the rope down to me fast enough so I lost one of my legs.
Logan K
8/8/2013 11:16:08 pm
Why did he lose a leg???
George
8/8/2013 11:18:09 pm
did the shake eat it or what
Allen H.
8/8/2013 11:20:19 pm
really cool but why did he lose his leg
Dylan l
8/8/2013 11:14:48 pm
Would you like to try jumping off of a bluff out into the
deep blue ocean?Well one really hot day at the beach i was
walking and I saw Alex. I asked, "Will you come walking with
me?"Alex mumbled,"I guess i will Dylan."Alex and I started
walking down the beach and we saw a bunch of people
in a line at the beach.Alex added,"Lets go see what these
people are doing in that huge line?"We were finally over there
we asked, "Whats going on over here?"One man replied,"We
are all jumping off of a bluff."I asked,"Where is the bluff
that you are jumping off of?"He said,"look up."
the guy asked,"wanna jump off of the bluff?" mumbled,"Sure,
lets
Jon k
8/8/2013 11:15:09 pm
i jumpped from a cliff in to the big blue sea.And when i jumpped i felt the wind hit me in till i landed in the sea.I belive i need to do this more and bring some people with me next time if they want?
Alex H
8/8/2013 11:15:14 pm
Would you ever go cliffdiving?Well I have.It was very fun,we found this bluff in the out in swimming distance so my friend went first it took a while to climb up the twenty feet bluff.When he jumped off it made a big splash,then it was my turn. I told myself it will be okay.I started climbing up the bluff, being cautious of where I climbed so i wouldn't fall off. When I reached the top,I closed my eyes and jumped.
Madison H.
8/8/2013 11:15:46 pm
Have you ever thought about cliff diving? I have. It was when
I went to Hawii with my friends.We took a plane to get there,
and I had never rode on a plane before. I have to admit,
riding on a plane was fun,but that wasn't even were the
adventure started! The fun part was when Lauren decided we
should go cliff diving."Are you crazy! I'm not jumping
off a cliff!" Emily shouted. " I am not crazy!" Lauren
exclaimed."I agree with Lauren." I stated. After trying
to convince Emily to come for about an hour,she finally
agreed. When we got there, I started getting nervous. "Are
you sure about this?"I stammered. "yeah"Emily agreed. After
more arguing, we finally decided to do it.When we got to
the top off the cliff we had to decide who will go first.
"Emily should go first!" Lauren stated."Noway!" Emily argued.
"I'll go first!" I exclaimed. I was so nervous when I got up
there! Then the guy yelled jump, and I had no time to
think about it,so I jumped.When we got to the bottom of
the cliff we all shouted "THAT WAS AWSOME!"
Lauren C.
8/8/2013 11:18:21 pm
nice job
Lauren C.
8/8/2013 11:16:37 pm
Splash! As I jump into the ocean water. My mouth was filled with salt water and I had to spit it out. Just the view I saw was amazing to think about. The moment I got dared was terrifying. My friend Allie dared me so I did. It was fun ,but scary. I almost fell and hit a rock. I was about an inch or two away from hitting it. I lost a finger though ,but I got it put back. Maya's voice was all that I heared and Haley's voice. "Lauren, are you okay?" Haley screamed. "Ya i just lost my finger!" I yelled at the top of my lungs. "Well lets go to the doctor now!" maya screamed as she woried about me.
So we left to go to the doctor and I was nervous. I thaought they might notknow what to do so i was a little scared. Allie kept telling me the most funniest jokes. "Allie well you stop makeing me laugh I am scared." I told Allie. The doctor came in and everything was fine. So we left and I was a 10 finger person. "Hey Lauren do you want to jump of that cliff again?" Allie asked. "Heck to the no!"I yelled at Allie.
Madison H.
8/8/2013 11:18:59 pm
cool story!
Allie W.
8/8/2013 11:21:36 pm
I love your story!!!!
James w
8/8/2013 11:17:40 pm
I jump of a cliff in to the dip sea I felt the water hit my face it felt wounderful I love jumping of cliffs. me and my friends wey wint to the sea win we got their my friend found a cliff I sid to him lits jump. of it my friend side hey is scard of highs...